Orbis Writings

He waved, she waved. What?!?!

March 28, 2008 · No Comments

There’s a few novels I’ve read so far where the author uses the action of waving when someone points to something.  For example:

Julia was looking for her shoes.  She asked Marc who in turn waved at the bag on the floor.

The above wasn’t taken from a novel, but is pretty close to what I have read.  My problem with this is that it’s vague and right away I either think Marc is waving at it like it’s a cruise ship or like he’s presenting a prize on The Price is Right.

There must be a better way to write these kinds of narrative.

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