There’s a few novels I’ve read so far where the author uses the action of waving when someone points to something. For example:
Julia was looking for her shoes. She asked Marc who in turn waved at the bag on the floor.
The above wasn’t taken from a novel, but is pretty close to what I have read. My problem with this is that it’s vague and right away I either think Marc is waving at it like it’s a cruise ship or like he’s presenting a prize on The Price is Right.
There must be a better way to write these kinds of narrative.


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